Archive for June, 2006

The Sights Along the Harbor: New and Collected Poems

Sunday, June 18th, 2006

by Harvey Shapiro
Wesleyan University Press 2006
Reviewed by Mike McDonough

8

Jewish Brooklynites, You Are Not Alone

sight along the harborThe Sights Along the Harbor, subtitled New and Collected Poems, conveniently gathers, with a few omissions, Harvey Shapiro’s published poetry to date. Since his first book The Eye, published in 1953, Harvey Shapiro has built a concise and important body of work slowly and carefully.  His work has moved away from the virtues espoused by the New Critics, but has also stayed apart from current trends, which has undoubtedly caused the recognition of his work to suffer.  He cites as his forbears and teachers Whitman, Williams, Crane, Zukofsky and Oppen, though his poems sometimes remind me of a Jewish Frank O’Hara, if that makes any sense; they are deceptively simple, open, consistently short and anecdotal, verging on aphoristic, only occasionally marred by crabbiness, and often very funny:

Caught on a side street
In heavy traffic, I said
To the cabbie, I should
Have walked.  He replied,
I should have been a doctor.

Citing Shapiro’s skill with anecdote does not do justice to the discipline he looks for in his craft. He knows with Martin Buber that “A story must be told in such a way/ That it constitutes help in itself.”  For Shapiro, this help is never far from the last things, in ways that speak both inside and apart from his Orthodox Jewish background.  Shapiro is solidly grounded in New York City, where he has lived most of his life.    Time and again, Shapiro takes an image of Brooklyn, its bare reality, and lets the miracle of it touch him.   Discussing the view of Manhattan skyscrapers from the Brooklyn Heights promenade, he writes:

They stand before us
Like tribal gods meting our success and unsuccess,
All that we have to lift our eyes to.

For Shapiro, desire is grounded in the body, and often expressed in unabashedly physical terms.  His poems are sometimes burdened by an offhand anatomical coarseness but, at their best, take care to express desire nakedly enough to keep it from being simply beautiful, or resting content with metaphor.    In “Jesus, Mary I Love You Save Souls,” the graffiti mentioned in the title reminds him of an image of his lover “head thrown back, legs parted.”  He says “When we get to the dark part of the ride… Keep me in that light/ Subway car light/ Burning forever/ With that image/ In my brain.”  While this has the beat of desire, the deliberate highlighting of the harsh subway car light has a way of letting body and soul cohabit in all their beauty and ugliness.  Ultimately, reality is the goddess he lusts for.

Shapiro’s work is more anecdotal that that of his Objectivist forbears George Oppen and Charles Reznikoff, though it retains their moral concern.  Reznikoiff especially cut through the world’s rhetoric with hard edged images, and straight reporting, reducing the “I,” honing the self as a lever for social change.   Shapiro knows that we always carry our home with us, whether we are in Japan or Brooklyn Heights, and that the “I” is often resistant to change.  He is not ashamed of his fallible, humanly limited point of view, and counts on candor to cut through the crap, including his own, while never taking himself too seriously:

He was looking for a
Universal message like,
Hemorrhoid sufferers
You are not alone.

Shapiro also knows how to approach the profound.   “Italy 1944,” first published in 1994, is a legitimate addition to the canon of WWII poems (Shapiro has recently edited an anthology of WWII poetry). He addresses his own aging with candor and insight, but The Sights Along the Harbor is no how-to treatise of geriatrics.  What I find most vital and relevant in this collection is his ability to turn a particular image into a paradoxical truth, letting it stand or fall on its own rather than masking it with terminal irony or overly broken syntax.  His work affirms the value of poetry as a spiritual practice, making us want to read on, while also facing the fact that poetry by itself, vital as it is, solves nothing in the end.

In New York
at the end of the day
if you are pleased with yourself
and the human condition
and feel no survivor’s guilt,
you have added to the darkness.

*


A Mnemonic for Desire

Sunday, June 18th, 2006

by Steve Mueske
Ghost Road Press 2006
Reviewed by John Deming

1_5

Nice Guys Finish Lightning Fast

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Steve Mueske’s a guy who writes poems, that much is evident, but apart from that, there’s nothing really grounding his first book, A Mnemonic for Desire. Mueske (MFA Hamline University, featured in Best New Poets 2005) has fashioned a lengthy debut: 74 poems over 113 pages, covering a range of unrelated topics and broken into five arbitrary sections. Every poet has lesser poems, and unfortunately there’s the sense Mueske wanted to include everything here.

There are some nice bits of narrative and absurdity, as in “Three Angels, a Door, and the Moon,” a tongue-in-cheek creation story: “In the beginning an angel / carried an anvil out of heaven.” In another strong poem, “The Art of Measured Breathing,” the narrator reminisces about Jason, a friend who fell out of another friend’s moving truck, survived, and “struck a weightlifter’s pose.” A bit relieved, the reader soon learns the catalyst for the recollection: the same indestructible friend is stricken with Lou Gehrig’s disease. It becomes a cold look at how easily a close friend can be lost:

                           …Legs that once powered
a hi-hat and bass drum had withered
to birch saplings beneath a yellow blanket.

But smart moments like this are usually buried by the sloppier ones. “Why There is Always a Ball in Their Water Dish,” a description of two cats playing with each other, would have made great dialogue for Bob Saget on America’s Funniest Home Videos: “It’s Monday Night Football, / cat-style.” And “The Day the Funk Arrived” is frustrating; in an epigraph he cites below-average songwriter Ben Harper as an authority on funk, then embarks on a poem with lines like “The funk was passing through. / That’s right, the funk, motherfucker.” I guess “motherfucker” is supposed to give him street credit; really it shows a callous misunderstanding of funk itself. If he’s to write about funk, he should study those who do it (George Clinton) or those who write well about it (Thomas Sayers Ellis); otherwise, just leave the subject to Ellis, our best funk-poet.

Often it seems when he’s not working from a gimmicky pretense (a commercial voiceover: “For those who prefer / unaided dreams, we offer another service”), he’s trying too hard to be funny, sentimental, or smart. But gimmick poems aside, this book has some gems, and the fact that he admits to having been struck by lightning is at least inspiring enough to make you buy a lottery ticket.

*


Coming to Rest

Sunday, June 18th, 2006

by Kathryn Stripling Byer
Louisiana State University Press 2006
Reviewed by Melinda Wilson

3

Pumpkins for Absence

byer coverKathryn Stripling Byer’s poems in Coming to Rest are often indulgently sweet.  The plush language and potentially captivating narrative are dulled by excessive sentimentality. The title poem of the book comes early on in Part 1 and immediately reveals Byer’s inability to let a stanza or a poem come to its natural ending point.  The first section of this poem is engaging; the speaker tells the story of a mother whose child has died and obsessively she asks her remaining children to name their first daughter after their dead sibling.  This compulsion seems to be what initially drives the poem into the second section, but Byer doesn’t allow it to do its work.  Rather, she continues:

Another name for letting go.
Or holding on.
Another name for home.

These lines are redundant, over-explanatory, and worse, they are distracting from the provocative nature of the previous lines.

Byer continues the poem in this fashion, with overwritten lines like, “I’m trapped in a coma / of middle-aged dullness” that evoke frustration rather than sympathy.  She does manage to end the fourth section nicely, though the fifth section seems extraneous.  The speaker has been visited by the dead child from the beginning of the poem whom we find out would have been her aunt.  The speaker is glad for the meeting and refers to the aunt as “this dust I’ve stirred from/ sleep.  This shell of light.”

Still, Byer is able to draw us in here and there in the first few sections. Coming to Rest is dedicated to her daughter, a fitting and obvious choice after the fourth consecutive poem that has to do with missing her.  This midsection of the book is overbearing and difficult to avoid skimming, but by the fourth “daughter” poem something unexpected happens, a sort of renewal.  Just when we’re sick of hearing about it Byer manages to draw us in one final time.  She describes her flight to Chicago to see her daughter and rather than focusing on the emotional reunion she observes the stratosphere from her window:

…lapis lazuli and white
shag carpet all the way there.
Nobody at home up here.

She momentarily gives in to her loneliness, the feeling that she has been left behind by her daughter and accepts it as not a wholly bad thing.

If there is one thing Kathryn Stripling Byer has down it’s creating a sincere sense of loneliness, not necessarily a pitiable loneliness, but often, a desirable one.  In “Stopping” the loneliness seems satisfying.  The speaker is coming back to an empty house, but somehow she is able to reconcile with the unoccupied space. “Nobody to welcome us home but the jiggety-jig / of these bugs in the glow of our headlights.”  What is slightly distracting is the use of “us” and “our” meaning that someone is in the car with her and therefore she is not alone, making it difficult to give in to the poem’s vital sense of solitude.

Byer is most successful when she is strange.  In “Halloween” the speaker has an imagined conversation with a pumpkin:

If I asked him, the pumpkin
would say he knows nothing of this. Let us pumpkins
be pumpkins, he’d say.

The talking pumpkin is the most interesting thing in this poem.  It’s funny; not particularly complex, but who cares.  The pumpkin just wants to be left the hell out of it.  Unfortunately it seems the pumpkin isn’t meant to be the center of the poem.  The focus is a young girl masquerading as a princess; she is less interesting.  It isn’t surprising to see a young girl pretending to be a princess from time to time, especially at Halloween.

On rare occasions, her sentimentality is successful.  The speaker in “Empty,” a mother, details what it is like to leave a daughter at college.  It is sad for the speaker, but it is also an opportunity.  We learn from the poem that the speaker’s own mother was overbearing and unable to let go of her children and that this is a chance for the speaker to do right where her mother might have failed.  By the end of the poem she has realized, “This is her city now,/ let her stand at the heart of it.”  She allows her daughter to own her new life, “Its welcoming emptiness.”

The final lines of the book are also some of the most gratifying.  Byer concludes by describing the souls of the world constantly leaving and returning as a “swish of an icy/ mare’s tail over the December sky.”

*


Capacity

Friday, June 9th, 2006

by James McMichael
Farrar, Straus & Giroux 2006
Reviewed by John Deming

4_5

How Much a Potato Holds, How Much It Can Do

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The Irish potato famine is something all but ignored in modern verse. In his sixth book, Capacity, James McMichael uses the poem “The Begotten” to remind us of its ugliness:

The hardier were entwined for

weeks sometimes

in the limbs of their expired kin.

“The Begotten” is one of seven long poems comprising McMichael’s new volume, and its vision of death on an island that can no longer provide for its population serves as an example of the book’s central metaphor—surprise, surprise—capacity.

In “Above the Red Deep-Water Clays,” McMichael defines capacity as both how “much a thing holds and how/much it can do.”  McMichael’s best work in this book forces the reader to look at the human race in this capacity. Born with what we’d like to imagine is limitless promise, we’re each really born within the confines of society, of social status, of anything we’ve the individual capacity to do or to hold:

Impertinent, the thorough

talking-to that one’s conditions gave one

 

right from the start.

The book’s biggest question, of course, becomes free will: does it exist inside an individual’s capacity, or are we merely playing out, step by step, the only things we’re capable of? Mankind’s will to endure despite its capacious limits becomes enough. And even if we’re given a talking-to by our conditions right from the start, it might also be important to acknowledge that, if we’re constantly pushing forward, there is no such thing as origin at all “until given out later as what has been/risen from.”

McMichael traditionally works in book-length poems, and this collection is essentially that; its seven poems are alike in form and content, and the voice itself is stable and strong, while not particularly surprising. His often formulaic language recalls Ammons, though his deductions seldom thunder like Ammons’s do. He presents a complex problem in this book, and he responds to the problem with verve; toward the end, though, he mentions a room or a “nothing-there” that becomes so stretched it is “his to break through.” Whether or not McMichael would claim he’s actually striving to break through his timeless predicament, between the lines, there’s the irresistible impulse to do so; naturally no one, including McMichael, has the capacity to “break through.” It might be more satisfying if there were a nod that the question itself is impossible for us; nevertheless, his will is admirable.

*


Black Lab

Friday, June 9th, 2006

by David Young
Knopf 2006
Reviewed by Melinda Wilson

six

Days Constellated with Light

black labDavid Young’s tenth book of poetry, Black Lab, is largely concerned with growing old; however, this concern is not typical of the “fear of death” theme that dominates much poetry. It is not despondent or begrudging, but spirited and celebratory, indulging in the sweetness of a slower phase of life.

The opening poem, “Walking Around Retired in Ohio,” establishes the mood. It is full of O’Hara-like exuberance for a world that is suddenly new to the speaker, who wakes early despite having nowhere to be, wakes early simply for “the great big day, the new one.” It seems the day is “great” and “big” merely because it is “new.”

The poet’s dog Nemo shares his spirited attitude in “Black Labrador.” The lab is described as “wherein mad scientists/ concoct excessive energy,” an obvious play on words. The speaker toys with the fact that “dog” is “God” spelled backwards and refers to his dog as his “Nemo-omen.” The anagrams are clever but not too clever, and even more impressive is the speaker’s ability to live with the energy and zeal of a Black Labrador. In a spring snowstorm:

…I’m still rapt

to see his coat so constellated, starred, re-starred,

making a comic cosmos I can love.

In these poems it seems that even issues typically worth hostility are given little time for grievance. “Eating a Red Haven Peach in the Middle of August in Ohio” details the speaker thinking about disturbing political issues: “the little daily shit storm, constant rain of lies.” Momentarily the poem gets heated and it seems that these issues are stronger than the poem is built to handle with lines like “the President’s moral hairspray.” However, it quickly returns to its former lightheartedness and ends beautifully; the speaker addresses Eve in paradise and says that despite “the fall,” the peach he is eating has sent him “back there for a moment.”

In “Lunar Eclipse Gnostic Hymn” Young demonstrates his ability to represent the common in an atypical manner. The subject of this poem is an eclipse, a long clichéd topic in poetry, but Young manages to refresh the scene for us: “the moon-round blushing like a bride,/ newly naked before her groom.” We can visualize the bride’s misty veil, her clouded train, without the speaker mentioning them. Young has made the moon a “stone maiden of a billion years,” beautiful and startling all over again.

Young often recasts ordinary objects and ideas. “Leaves stop talking; tongues are the only tongues,” implying, of course, that leaves were once talking—thick, fleshy leaves. In “Petrarch Watches the Moon Rise Over the Vaucluse,” time or the aging process go through several transformations, “The angel of age is a sleepy fellow, a/ shaggy woodman, a puked-out volcano.” Aging returns as a sunset in the book’s final poem, the misty and soothing “The Hour of Blue Snow.” The poem has a mythical feeling; a few deer creep out from darkness at this illusory hour and then evaporate:

As when the ancient gods

came down to wander their enchanted world.

Then I remember to breathe again,

and the blue snow shines inside me.

One’s breath, held for the entire book, is finally released.

*


Not for Specialists: New and Selected

Friday, June 9th, 2006

by W.D. Snodgrass
BOA Editions 2006
Reviewed by John Deming

7

Come Around to the Beard

not for specialistsW.D. Snodgrass has a sense of humor about his surname; each of his three ex-wives were “more than pleased/to change it back,” he writes. And though it’s not nearly as iconic a name as Lowell, Berryman, Sexton, or Plath, a sufficient number of people still pay Snodsy (Sexton’s nickname) his dues as a pioneer of “confessional” poetry.

Snodgrass, who turns 80 this year, is a bit different from his then-contemporaries. While his early lyrics were essentially autobiographical, he never quite caved in to the self-indulgent despair that other so-called confessionals used both to their advantage and to their detriment. As decades have passed and the term “confessional” has grown uglier and uglier, Snodgrass has put forth a number of different efforts. Not for Specialists collects some of the best and worst of these efforts.

It goes without saying that the volume is worthwhile, at the very least, because it may introduce a new audience to his great long poem “Heart’s Needle.” His first book, which carried the same title, won him a Pulitzer Prize and national renown in 1959 ( years before Sexton’s and Plath’s first books); famously, he has not reached that kind of plateau since. But the poem, an astonishing and sympathetic look at his relationship with his daughter once he’s divorced her mother, is becoming more and more necessary to the canon:

If I loved you, they said, I’d leave
     and find my own affairs.
Well, once again this April, we’ve
    come around to the bears;

punished and cared for, behind bars
    the coons on bread and water
stretch thin black fingers after ours.
    And you are still my daughter.

There is other work that is at least as good, if not better, than the poems comprising Heart’s Needle (from which a meager selection is offered in this book, including the poem responsible for the book’s title), though some of it’s just lyric meditation that goes belly up. He’s downright terrifying in his selections from The Fuehrer Bunker, a World War II series written from the first-person perspective of various prominent Nazis, among them Adolf Hitler, Heinrich Himmler, Eva Braun, and Dr. Joseph Goebbels. In one of three typed “telegrams,” Himmler writes, “we have to recognize the risks demanded to found a utopia just think consider the vengeance for their theyre kin theyd wreak on us in no more than 20 years we must rush them out of Zossen or ‘disinfect’ them now.”

Snodgrass, like his former contemporaries, works best with heavy subject matter. Several weak poems in this volume are selected from Kinder Capers, poems which Snodgrass notes “were written for collaborations with the painter DeLoss McGraw.” Whether or not the poems appear out of context, they’re the type you’d like to call bad Frost imitations, but that are really just far-too-sentimental light verse about the changing seasons. The following section, selections from Each in His Season, falls into a similar trap; after a while, his rhyme schemes give out on him, becoming forced and predictable, and his sense of wisdom takes a smoke break.

Snodgrass resurrects himself in the final section, a collection of new poems. Some are a little tacky and light, not that Snodgrass would give a damn about that opinion. He addresses himself in “Critic”: “Since you’re unfashionable these days, you/Can quit worrying he might praise you.” Far more resonant, though, are poems such as the surprising “Talking Heads,” a meditation on America’s recent warmongering. He returns to World War II, discussing how “analysts” often ask how it is that “decent Germans” remained ignorant of the Holocaust:

None mentions just how many we let squirm
And twist at rope’s end for their predetermined,
Preemptive wars. But then, of course, they lost.

The point, as in The Fuehrer Bunker, is that, whether in marriage or war, no one person’s idea of Utopia can exist without sacrificing another person’s, and an acknowledgement of the importance of balance is perhaps the best we can do. But if Snodgrass deals best with heavy material, it’s also nice in the end to look at poems like “For the Third Marriage of My First Ex-Wife” to see how he has come full circle, meditating upon their “daughter, still recovering from/her own divorce.” In the end, the book is worthwhile as a look at an important poet, if for no other reason than to feel the eerie calm of a man too hard to let his verse succumb to melodrama.

*


Eastern Mountain Time

Sunday, June 4th, 2006

by Joyce Peseroff
Carnegie Mellon University Press 2006
Reviewed by Melinda Wilson

3_5

Beyond Fear of the Maker

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In Joyce Peseroff’s fourth collection of poetry, Eastern Mountain Time, mushrooms are imagined as flying saucers that have landed after a space-storm, a fallen leaf moved by wind is thought to be a wounded mouse, and certain lilacs are deemed “famously sad.” 

The imaginative leaps taken in Peseroff’s book are easy to run with; in fact they are well-calculated and mostly seamless.  However, her poems ask too much of the reader when Peseroff indulges in excessive description and over-extended similes.  Her speaker compares herself to a Monarch:

…the globe of rusty pink milkweed

essential nectar for a jade, transparent

chrysalis…

When Peseroff’s poems are not overly descriptive they are, more often than not, lacking in vibrancy.  The title poem of the collection is especially unexciting with the repetition of the line “then nothing.” 

Peseroff writes best about death and animals.  In “The Ridge” she questions death’s motives as if death were a being with intention:

…why does extinction need

to demonstrate variety, nuance, its grip

on arteries, the worthlessness of lungs?

Often though, her struggles with death and the “maker,” are reconciled in a sweet and calming fashion. She presents death not as a finality, but as a transformation, “…swift erratic heart, a humming- / bird about to meet the lily’s bliss.”  In “The Knock” she presents death as a normality, thereby depriving it of its assumed power or dominance.  Death is as regular as preparing a pot of stew. 

In “Killings,” one of her most successful poems, Peseroff’s speaker ponders whether or not she is capable of killing a chicken.  She believes she could and wonders what tool she would use.  She goes on to remember all the animals that she has killed in her lifetime.  She mentions a four-pound salmon that was the brightest thing she had killed.  The poem is provocative, turning death and killing into something bright and desirable. 

The poem “Natural Light” creates a sense of serenity beginning with its title.  The poem recreates an orchard scene that has been ravished by the mice that owls hunt and grow fat off of: 

…stars

unrolling like an opera score for owls,

crickets, and skinny, long-legged frogs.

 Though the poem can seem stark, it is peaceful and refined, a good example of one of Peseroff’s greatest strengths, the calm atmosphere her poems often create.

*


Averno

Sunday, June 4th, 2006

by Louise Glück
Farrar, Straus & Giroux 2006
Reviewed by John Deming

8_5

“Persephone is having sex in hell”

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The “modern retelling” of a Greek myths is a typical, played out, and more often than not, boring endeavor. But Louise Glück’s reworking of the Persephone myth in the icy and dramatic Averno works, in part, because Persephone isn’t exactly the core of the book; rather, she serves as a means of informing its bigger, colder, more apocalyptic corners. Even before Persephone enters the book by name, there is the sense that any human being’s development of experience and awareness can lead to grief — the more one knows about the violence and horror that are seamless with reality, the more one is altered. So Persephone — dragged to hell and raped by Hades, released but forced to return for three months every year — is as changed as anyone that’s had an earth-shattering experience. In this passage from “October,” the unnamed narrator could easily be Persephone, her mother Demeter, or anyone else, for that matter:

Summer after summer has ended,
balm after violence:
it does me no good
to be good to me now;
violence has changed me.

When Glück brings in Persephone by name, she takes things a step further, suggesting that Persephone went to hell with Hades of her own volition. It becomes possible that Persephone is finding experience the old fashioned way—chasing the bad boy—and the real debate is between Hades and Demeter, the disapproving mother. Demeter’s a goddess, we’re reminded, so she could procreate again if she wanted to; instead, she allows winter to come year after year while Persephone’s away. This hostility suggests the possibility that sometimes even earth itself “has no wish / to continue as a source of life.” The story of Persephone, Glück explains, should be read “as an argument between the mother and the lover— / the daughter is just meat.”

Though the book benefits from its mythological thread, Glück’s greatest triumph lies elsewhere. The poem “Landscape” is an amazing accomplishment; as in “October,” the speaker might be, but doesn’t have to be, someone from the myth of Persephone. The second section of the five-part poem, which appeared in The Best American Poetry 2003 under the full poem’s title, is one of the strongest. She describes the look of a barren and frozen planet that’s “bleached, like a negative”:

…the light passed
directly through it. Then
the image faded.
Above the world
there was only blue, blue everywhere.

Glück deals best in extremes. The book is full of buzz words like “love,” “soul,” and “death,” and I can see where this would be a turn-off for some people; one could equally claim that a blanket of snow representing memory loss is overdone. But Glück is too precise to let it become a problem. If snow and ice show how one forgets one’s past “lives,” we understand, they also mean a fresh start. “Is she / at home anywhere?” Glück asks, and we’re reminded that each of us is constantly dying and being remade.  Averno, a crater lake in southern Italy, was considered by ancient Romans an entrance to the underworld; the balance between the fire of the underworld and the ice of the surface world is constantly in flux. And ultimately, it’s Demeter whose grief takes center stage.

According to the myth, Demeter is responsible for creating winter, because she is in angry despair during each three-month period that Persephone spends in the underworld. Glück, however, suggests that when Persephone went down there for the first time, she was gone for good—and only Demeter’s re-imagining of her begets spring. “Now over and over / her mother hauls her out again,” Glück writes; then Persephone re-enters from the first-person and wonders how to proceed after the horror she’s experienced: “I approached Zeus. Tell me, I would ask him, / how can I endure the earth?”  The answer, it seems, is to forget everything and live the same life, as Glück hopefully concludes in the final section of “Landscape”:

And I thought: if I am asked
to return here, I would like to come back
as a human being, and my horse
to remain himself. Otherwise
I would not know how to begin again.

*


Path, Crooked Path

Sunday, June 4th, 2006

by John Balaban
Copper Canyon Press 2006
Reviewed by John Deming

6_5stars_6

Person as Globe

balaban coverJohn Balaban’s talent is for gorgeous narrative and description, and in Path, Crooked Path, the two-time National Book Award nominee navigates classic predicaments: the one against the many, the poetic love of an unaffected world, a society helpless against its governing forces. What develops is a somewhat cynical but sympathetic vision of the American Empire: whether sooner or later, all empires collapse. By stepping in and out of the country, he shows genuine adoration for its place in a fluctuating whole. The book, Balaban’s fifth poetry volume, is a great antidote to a recent avalanche of poetry that confines itself to the function and hope of the 48 contiguous states.

Balaban, a Vietnam vet, shows he’s interested in the current political climate, so long as it’s regarded with the fact that political climates are capricious. In “Looking Out from the Acropolis, 1989,” an early triumph, the poet describes societal reaction to the fall of the Berlin Wall. The wall fell to communist and capitalist gasps that “circled the earth for a year/then disappeared through holes in the ozone layer.” By the end, the poem returns to the personal; lamenting the Berlin Wall and other global sorrows, the speaker is drinking vodka with his friend Georgi, a Bulgarian exile:            

                                                                                 …Georgi
opened his flask of vodka and poured some on a stone
before we drank our toasts to the new world order
and to whatever muse might come to give us words.

The book covers a range of experiences in Eastern Europe and Southern Asia, so his returns to perspective on the American social climate become all the more engaging. As interested as he is in America’s place in the global, he recognizes that any society is mad with individual people who have individual problems. “Poor Sap” describes a man devastated by the loss of a lover; at first the man contemplates suicide, but eventually he settles for a heroin habit. The oblivion of addiction becomes necessary for the alleged “poor sap” to imagine himself with her again: “From dunes they’d watch gulls teeter/on updrafts above the waves, drifting.”

At least as interesting as Balaban’s original work are his translations of the Romanian poet Stefan Augustin Doinas and the Bulgarian poets Kolyo Sevov, Lyubomir Nikolov, and Alexandra Veleva, which pepper the first and third sections of the book.

Those, and the book’s second section, a short vacation titled “Miami Suite,” show that Balaban’s talent for description is as good as it’s ever been. “Some Notes on Miami” pictures snails that “slide across the air-conditioned glass/as morning sun plunges through our windows” and delves with poise into post-hurricane Florida.

As much as I liked this book, I can’t vouch for its first and worst poem, “Highway 61 Revisited.” Stealing a Dylan title, and employing such a cheap trick as borrowing Dylan lyrics (“That way, down Highway 61”) work to no desirable effect. The poem is nevertheless important because it pictures a contemporary American from the thick of contemporary America; unfortunately, confounding conclusiveness like “the bright empty ribbon of Highway 61,/loud with strange cries echoing across America” feel forced.  The poem does offer some nice description, for example, when he’s outside with friends and “the moon has risen over the Sierra Madres”:

shining on burros shuffling through willows, below cottonwoods
along the Rio Grande, glistening on the backs of thumb-size
toads in the stone pans where water seeps in the canyons…

“Highway 61 Revisited” also serves to build an arc to the book’s final poem, “The Great Fugue”; standing opposite the middle aged man in the heart of America, the poem recounts the people that took him in when he was “16 and a runaway,” living in Delaware: “Easter, and I am playing the Grosse Fugue, hearing/the faded voices of those good people.” A life of grace emerges, and you inhabit it when you inhabit these poems. Balaban’s struggle for adoration becomes a sympathetic fusion of the personal and the global: if all empires inevitably progress and disappear, we’re reminded, so do human beings.

*


Crooked Run

Sunday, June 4th, 2006

by Henry Taylor
Louisiana State University Press 2006
Reviewed by Melinda Wilson

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Bearded with Muddy Grass

crooked runHenry Taylor’s eighth book of poetry Crooked Run—the winner of the L.E. Phillabaum Poetry Award—both begins and ends with the speaker walking the land that his family lived on for more than four generations. The second and final poems in the book are entitled “Creek Walk.” The first details the life of animals on the land and the second details their deaths on the same, how “the open jaws might appear to say/ we all must find our hard deathbeds.” These poems sandwich the life and stories of Taylor’s family on the land and, what’s most intriguing, what happens in between.

Taylor, a Pulitzer Prize winner for his book The Flying Change, introduces his characters as if we’ve known them for years. We meet Uncle Will, the Hatchers, Mr. Clark, and William Valentine among others. Each of these characters has stories in connection with the same land. Often Taylor’s speaker talks about his attempts as a young man to impress his grandfather. The speaker is frequently self-deprecating and regretful, for example, in “Snapshots”– “wanting, as always in his presence,/ to do right, I made some lame reply.”

Most of the stories these poems tell are funny, witty, and light-hearted, though Taylor does not shy away from revealing some darker happenings. In “Summer Hill” he tells the story of a man who allows Mr. Clark to sleep with his young daughter in exchange for money. He also takes the perspective of perhaps his Great Grandmother or a Great Aunt, and writes of the destruction of the land during the American revolution. The poem “My Dear Sister Hannah,” takes the form of a letter. The poem is full of dramatic language and at times seems self-indulgent:

I despise the rebels more than ever
for causing this awful mess.
Some weak-minded people will perhaps
be more [illegible] after this

Taylor’s shorter poems are often restricted by their rhyme schemes, as in “A Trace of Old Road Work,” which is made up of three rhyming quatrains. The rhymes of the first quatrain are off-rhymes and awkward compared to the final two stanzas’ perfect rhymes. The poem sets up a nice scene that speaks to the age-old battle between nature and humankind, but Taylor allows the speaker to dominate the final line of the poem, “it stands where I can show it to you still.” What makes the poem so nice prior to the last line is the near-absence of the speaker.

The longer poems, given time to fully develop, are Taylor’s most effective. The best poems in the book are those that are almost entirely imagined, as in “George Washington’s Farewell to His Hounds.” The retelling of the farewell is an obviously emotional story, but Taylor avoids melodrama by incorporating dialogue:

“I can’t help thinking he must of cast those hounds
a few times on his way up to the ferry.
Start one more fox.”

“Boy Hunting in Bog” is another exceptionally imaginative poem. The speaker imagines his Uncle as a boy combing through the marsh for bullfrogs and snapping turtles. The poem is emotive, but not overbearing and ends with the speaker imagining his dead Uncle as a boy:

…I still see him walking
with a heron’s slow stride, pure attention,
not quite of this world, but deep in it.

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