by Galway Kinnell
Houghton Mifflin 2006
Reviewed by John Deming
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A Firm Grip
Ten books of poems, Galway Kinnell wrote before Strong is Your Hold, and ten years it has been since his last book, Imperfect Thirst, was published.
All Yoda-speak aside, the title is actually better than it sounds: a line borrowed from Whitman, it’s a rather apt title given the book’s recurring notion that anyone or anything which is still alive—including poets who turn 80 in a month and a half—is as alive as anyone or anything else.
And to have a hold on life for now, regardless of how alive you are ten minutes from now, is a fierce and remarkable thing. As is the notion of simply holding someone else’s hand for dear life, whether you are elderly in bed, or on the verge of jumping from a burning tower. More on that later.
As consumed with his own end as he is in this book, in a sense Kinnell has never been more alive. In fact the most moving experience I had with this book occurred while playing the accompanying CD—on which he reads all 25 poems comprising the book—and listening to an American Great in all of his romantic splendor: “Greetings to you my listeners,” he announces in his deep-gruff at the onset of the disc, and I find myself double-checking my apartment to see if it has a fireplace.
Kinnell would have to square off in a deathmatch against Donald Hall for greatest living reader of poetry, greatest presenter of grandfatherly solace and cavernous articulation. If I had a million bucks, I might offer it to either of them to read “‘Twas the Night Before Christmas” at my Mom’s house this Sunday night. Hall’s collected (earlier this year, also from Houghton Mifflin) included a CD as well, though Kinnell might have the edge on him because he engages the listener in conversation before his poems, giving some insight and context not present in the text, and evoking from the listener an earnest “I really do appreciate that fact, Galway, and I anticipate hearing your poem.” Some of it is in fact of more interest than the book itself.
The book itself. That it’s flat-out not Kinnell’s best work is okay. Its slow narrative and metaphorical naturism will undoubtedly delight Kinnell fans, ex-Kinnell students, and anyone excited by the prospect of hearing more from one of America’s last poet-poets. Desperate romantic obsession guided his best books, specifically Body Rags and The Book of Nightmares, and the fact the poet has slowed down this much—has in fact developed a believable resolve that the world is hard but that being alive is good—is soothing at the least, and the best poems drive home some powerful post-9/11 humanism.
Slowing down is nice. But some of these have a way of going on. “Pulling a Nail,” for example, is a 6-page, 14-stanza narrative about…pulling a nail. Maybe half-a-dozen metaphors are attached to the nail, and we learn he’s dissembling a house his father built, which makes for some evocative meditation:
Slipping for leverage
a scrap of quarter-inch wood
under the hammer, I apply
a methodology I learned from
unscrewing stuck bottle lids:
first, put to it the maximum force
you think you can maintain,
and second, maintain it.
All other thoughts about the nail are as interesting, or less interesting, than this, while a metaphysical notion he’s in a kind of tug-of-war with his father works best. But there’s too much description, over-explaining—too many ideas about the nail for a poem about a nail. It’s difficult, at this kind of pace, to read more than one poem in a sitting. Some might see this a strength, but me, I’d rather finish, absorb, take my enchantment into the next poem—not keep waiting for the nail to be pulled, then bookmark my page and go buy another coffee.
The book mostly contains poems about plain and rural experiences. It’s virtually all straightforward narrative, some fascinating (burning a brush pile and later finding “a small blackened snake, the rear half / burnt away, the forepart alive”), some dull (a “she” releases into the wind pillow-feathers which “net zero on the scale of materiality”). But all of the pillow/snake/nail meditations, while carrying a soft pace, are written into the ground. The “strength” or urgency with which one holds onto one’s life translates to many of these poems; he stays with each a bit longer than need be, narrating and questioning until he can narrate and question no more.
“When the Towers Fell” is an important exception. It’s unlike anything else in the book, and the back-story he tells about it on the CD—one involving students he had to meet just after the incident—is compelling. The poem first appeared in The New Yorker and in The Best American Poetry 2003, and has been neatened up since then. He brings in several other voices, among them Paul Celan and Hart Crane, and splices some cultural implication and personal meditation with absolute terror:
I thought again of those on the high floors
who knew they would burn alive and then, burned alive.
As if there were mechanisms of death
so mutilating to existence that no one
gets over them, not even the dead.
“When the Towers Fell” is not the best 9/11 poem, nor the most subtle, but it is among the most affecting. Its picture of people who are alive but consciously on the verge of death finds an eerie link to the more pedestrian but equally real struggle with impending death our narrator engages elsewhere in the book—however terrified the instant, strong is the hold a person has on life a split second before he or she dies.
A terrifying sensibility. But the very sound of Kinnell’s voice might sooth you a bit. He invokes the oft-recalled image of 9/11 victims jumping hand-in-hand from the tower to avoid burning to death: “Some leapt hand in hand that their fall down the sky might happen more lightly.” Surely Kinnell would be the first to admit he had no idea why some people have the fortune to ease into old age, to slow down and reflect, while others face almost inconceivable terror. And to admit that at the same time, the notion of his own death is haunting nevertheless. It’s “all but certain” he will die before his wife, he notes, but,
I will cross over into you
and ask you to carry
not only your own memories
but mine too until you
too lie down and erase us
both together into oblivion.
He possesses a deep understanding of the importance of companionship, and the terror he’s seen flush with other deaths makes him frame his own death with classic Kinnell romanticism: “I, who so often used to wish to float free / of earth, now with all my being want to stay.” Kinnell’s best earlier work is urgent in a similar way, which slips Strong Is Your Hold under “lesser” Kinnell; the slow rural poems are nice, while a bit too long, but they also distract from the manic link between self, horror, and redemption-through-companionship that emerges in the best poems. Look at the last poem: “Why Regret?” After a lifetime of questioning through poetics, he decides again to close with a question and a resolution:
Doesn’t it outdo the pleasures of the brilliant concert
to wake in the night and find ourselves
holding hands in our sleep?
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Houses can make you act oh so romantic. Years after you’ve moved from an old home, there might exist the compulsion to stare at it like it’s some old friend or dog or food-find. If it used to be brown but has since been painted yellow, it’s not the house’s fault.
On the Side of the Crow is Christien Gholson’s first book, but it reads like the work of an accomplished artist. The book is a series of loosely related, tautly written prose poems, all titled like works of art in a museum. Though I’m not convinced that the titles consistently illuminate the poems they head, Gholson proves a compelling curator, an enigmatic guide to our passage through his vividly original underworld.
Charles Wright is certainly prolific and while many might expect him to recede into redundancy his latest, Scar Tissue, is a testament to his unwillingness and inability to do so. The natural successor to 2004’s Buffalo Yoga (which was the natural successor to A Short History of the Shadow, which was the natural successor to Appalachia, and so on down the line to Black Zodiac), Scar Tissue is yet another gratifying chapter from Wright, whose every collection seems to add an impressive and necessary facet to his life’s work. Scar Tissue—portions of which were collected in a chapbook last year unfortunately titled The Wrong End of the Rainbow—does just that, with a bit less command than the aforementioned collections.