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Landscape with Silos

Wednesday, January 28th, 2009

by Deborah Bogen
Texas Review Press 2006
Reviewed by Scott Hightower

7.5

Pitch Perfect

bogen coverLandscape with Silos is a first book. It garnered the 2005 Texas Review Prize for Deborah Bogen. No wonder. It is a smart, sharp book, brimming with accomplishments.

Landscape is divided into four distinct sections. The first unit, “Learning the Language,” is comprised of poems reflecting the landscape and the aural wonder of childhood.  There is at least a horse, an owl, and a cow:

I prefer moonlight,
I like the green to be almost black.
I like a lot of space

with nothing going on.
A few white words
and the rim of the milk pail polished
and fine in my dark.

(“Moving the Moon”)

The particular landscape is North American, somewhere in the Dakotas where the received language of adult quotidian and childhood wonder swirl into the poet’s inner ear.  The poet’s youthful observations lead off from the main road to “another eye, another way to see things.” People study foreign languages and may one day go somewhere to use them. The poet will find her way through observation and language, too.

There are strangers in the landscape as well. In some provincial American landscapes, the interlopers would be seasonal deer hunters.  But in the Dakotas, the foreigners amid the locals are more carefully pressed and are connected to the Federal government. A myriad of small things differentiate them from the locals. One is that they do not take their meals at home’s table:

One nail sticking up in a pile of boards,
air bladders from fish brought home for supper,
sugar in green glass bowls,
glittering rattlesnakes….

We drank water from old pipes,
picnicked under windbreaks, peach pits,
and eggshells, and in the glove box
roadmaps to the river, to the reservation

to Fargo and Minot.
And later in the same poem:

… But no maps
to the silos where men tended missiles so big
we didn’t even dream about them.
They didn’t scare us, those missiles,

not the men either who rose like bankers,
sat calmly at the counter, starched and pressed.
Keys jingled on their belts.
They ordered root beer and blackbottom pie.

(“Landscape with Silos”)

The second section of the book, “The Poem Ventures Out,” is an ars poetica series. Here are some of the poem titles:  “The Poem Takes the GRE,” “The Poem Enters the Talent Show,” “The Poem is Put Under Surveillance,” “The Poem Goes to the Kitchen to Empty the Dishwasher But Ends Up Praying”:

Why can’t you forget the wallpaper
by the bed where you dreamt of the golden girl
feeding her father’s ducks. No one cares
about that. Forget the skate key, and the way
the evening sky invented surgeries,
carving its space in you.

You’ll never enter a darkness as whole
and strange as your mother’s breath after the party
or feel heat like her palm searing you as
she brushed the bangs from your face.
But you love it there, half-light, half-opened door.
And the poem knows that.

(“The Poem as Tease”)

In the third section, “Visitations,” the disturbances of lives move to the center of each poem. Family histories corrupt and eventually slip away. Bodies and minds slide toward disorientation, diagnoses, medications, and therapies. The poet observes individuals experiencing physical and emotional disorder. The poems, like the lives they reflect and like the poetic voice that renders them, stay grounded and independent. Each life is an individual compendium of individual perceptions. There is almost always another order into which things can be assembled. Ordination and authorship emerge as central subjects:

Seismologists say things are stable
but we know different.
Feel the new laws?
They dog the heart like hunger
at the offramp, like drunks
at Union Station,
like rain that chants
no money. No money.
No money.

… Some say hardness of heart can
shake the earth. Some say it’s coming.
It’s coming. It’s coming.

If your house has a candle, light it.
If the baby cries, pick her up.

(“L.A.’s Millennial Love Songs”)

In the last section “Within the Porcelain Theater,” Bogen pushes much further toward the “phantoms the tick-tock brain concocts.”  Mystery resides in a theater.  The theater could be a human skull or a human institution. Some might even see it as a correlative for a toilet.  There are images of walled gardens, prison wards, slanted mirrors, sanitariums, lunacy, and fluid sexuality.  And the notion of taking flight from such a state. When the question of Insanity is put to the Poet, the response is clear, but rendered in prose:

    

In here we write of marshes,lurid dreams, water
flowing out of control. Many of us have translated
Chinese poems full of orchids, drunkenness and
sexual longing.

(“Four Answers to QuestionsAbout Insanity”)

The Poems close with:

What I will not see, sees me.

(“Dreams after Jean’s Reading”)

Bogen’s poems are grounded. Adornments are deliberately fundamental, not heroic. The shapes of the poems range widely… but not the quality or the merit. Throughout, Landscape with Silos is at once agile and rigorous:

Grace must be like this sunstreak
on the linoleum,
this unexpected elegance,
a rope of gold up which we pull ourselves
amazed, having thought it gone
that thing which penetrates,
which chooses us,
which illumines one moment
so that the book of hours opens
to a single letter, loved
and labored over,
lavished and extravagantly gilded—say
a mystic vowel embellished in blue,
a hint of scarlet and in the center
nothing,
the white suddenly framed. . .

(“The Poem Goes to the Kitchen to Empty”)

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Shadow Architect

Monday, January 26th, 2009

by Emily Warn
Copper Canyon Press 2008
Reviewed by Jason Schneiderman

4

No Code

shadow architectThis book is meant to be read slowly, and I think that Copper Canyon does it a disservice by not making it glossier and more visually pleasing.  It’s divided into 22 sections, one for each letter of the alef-beit (the Hebrew Alphabet), and then there are three larger divisions.  In the introduction, Warn describes the genesis (the Bereshit?) of the project as a collaboration with the visual artist Dennis Evans.  His work for the letter Pei is on the cover, and it’s gorgeous.  Think of a Cornell box with mezuzahs and circuits. I think that the book would make more sense—and be more sensual—were Evan’s visuals to work in conjunction with Warn’s text.  Considering that each section has a full page introduction reproducing each Hebrew letter alongside its mystical significance (yud:  The hand of god; Nun: the shadow architect), the book is already leaning in the direction of coffee-table-art-book. 

Each of the 22 sections ends with three quotations.  These act as brakes on the trajectory of the book.  Warn is clear that her approach was deliberative:  “I studied the letters in the same way I study Zen koans” (xiii).  So it’s not surprising that each section ends with paradoxes for contemplation such as, “The glory of God is to conceal things” (83) or “The final end of knowledge is not to know” (117).  If one has to thrice pause and consider after each section (3 quotes per section x 22 sections=66 contemplations in all), it would make sense to have something nice to look at during the pauses.  The slowness and fragmentary nature of the book seems betrayed by it’s familiar form.

The poems themselves tend toward a celebration of the natural world with a mystic bent:

To invent the alef-beit,
decipher the language of crows,
read a tangle of bare branches
with vowels of the last leaves
scrawling their jittery speech
on the sky’s pale page
                                   (7)

The general theme of the book is that the incomprehension we face in nature (what’s that crow saying?) is the paradigm by which all human incomprehension can be understood.  The poems repeatedly raise epistemological concerns, only to abandon them to the phenomenological experience of nature: 

How you lived not knowing you lived.
How you postponed this reckoning

believing you lacked a desire to know.
Yet here you are listening to a leaf

scrape air, your hands smeared with mud.
                                                               (13)

Nature tends to stand in for the divine, though at times cloyingly so.  In a poem called “The Sabbath Queen”:

Knit your soul to hers
as pine needles knit stars.
                                       (42)

Do pine needles knit stars?  Warn’s Surrealist bent is stronger and interests me more than her return to Deep Image.  She clearly has a talent for juxtaposing images that sound compelling together.  At the end of “The House of Fluency”:

You follow blind fish, find a violin with missing strings,
          a glass float, a mouth harp.
                                                    (82)

I’m not a mystic, and for the most part, the Jewish liturgy bores me.  My first objection is that it’s incredibly repetitive.  I get it.  You’re our king, we’re your subjects; you’re our shepherd, we’re your sheep, yadda yadda yadda.  My second objection is that the insights feel so true as to be axiomatic (we all die), or entirely false (everything turns out OK in the end).  Warn avoids most of those pitfalls.  She uses only one extensive list, and though at times she tells an axiomatic truth, poets must be allowed axiomatic truths, as long as they are beautifully told.  Warn makes it clear in the introduction that her major intellectual commitment is to postmodernism, not Judaism:  “Whereas religious Jewish thinkers believe the Hebrew Alphabet is a code that reveals divine intention, I came to see it as a code that reveals the limits and generative power of language” (xiii).  Unfortunately, I never saw those limits being explored—I kept hoping to find myself somewhere unfamiliar, but I kept coming back to well-worn territory.

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Amigo Warfare

Friday, January 16th, 2009

by Eric Gamalinda
Cherry Grove Collections 2007
Reviewed by Scott Hightower

7.5

Songs of Fertility and Subversion

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One hesitates to say that the poems in Eric Gamalinda’s most recent collection, Amigo Warfare, could be the poems of the love child of Emily Dickinson and César Vallejo…but there, it is said. There are moments in this spell of poems where one might have opted for Dickinson and Rumi—but Vallejo and Dickinson form a distinctively colonial American union.  Swimming in the false exactitude of things like calendars and numbers, Gamalinda launches into displacement:

  Like Sitting Bull, may you find America a hard place
  in which to save the soul. …Twelve years ago
  I crossed six time zones, three continents
  half a lifetime.  Existence is mathematics:
                                                                (“Plan B”)

Mallarme has already adjured us that the coordinates of reduction for Existence are Poetry and Economics. 

                                     …people think 
  they’re dreaming us but we are really
  dreaming them: we grow tired of resisting
                                          (“False Hopes, True North”)

The “I” in English romantic lyric poetry functions a bit differently than the “I” in a poem by Cesar Vallejo…or Gamalinda.   Both Vallejo and Gamalinda are writers working in colonially-received mother tongues, languages in the discomfort of cultural inheritance; both are poets of emigration and self-imposed exile. Gamalinda arcs from the Philippines to the U.S., where Vallejo left Peru to close out his life in Europe, both moving closer to the seat of their inheritance, both technically green-card poets.

Gamalinda has no trouble finding material:  Bollywood, Jesus, the Mayan prediction of 2012. He evokes Luis González Palma, another artist (Guatemalan) who, like himself, unwraps social and political realities to expose mysticism and indigenous suffering. In many ways, Palma and Gamalinda bookend one another:

  This is the graveyard of broken watches and discarded
               chandeliers.
  This is the time of the arrival of assassins.
  Sorrow is all stillness, a pool of rainwater.
  Sorrow is a red silk line between the dreamed and the
               disappeared.
  This is what I dreamed last night
  (you can’t see it, because it was just a dream).
            (“Poems of Sorrow, after Luis González Palma”)

But one cannot stay in the dream. One slips back down the red silk line to the broken world.

The collection is divided into three sections. Each opens with the apparatus of an epigraph.  The first epigraph quotes Italian filmmaker Michelangelo Antonioni.  The second quotes Argentinan writer Jorge Luis Borges. The third quotes Russian filmmaker Andrey Tarkovsky. This is art that is aware that it is art; thoughts stay in the meanings of sentences.

The title poem appears in the second section. “Amigo Warfare” is what the Americans derisively called the Filipino style of resistance [from 1899 to 1904]. The Filipinos were friends during the day or when confronted; but at night or when no one was looking, they were guerrillas.

In the third section Gamalinda unfurls a majestic poem in four movements, each movement shaped like a pendulum or downward pointing arrowhead.  “Abell 2218” draw its title from a cluster of galaxies. Gamalinda slides in scale from cosmic to personal. Out again. Back again. The poetics can be dizzying, but there is no doubt about the poet’s ambitious and dazzling vision. One might even evoke another English, mystic poet involved beyond the disquietude of the mortal with the spirit of prophecy, William Blake:

  To begin this small, to know
  one life alone completes the world.

  Until the sun cuts through the waves,
  until the planets dwindle and hold still,
  and love rips us open
  and another million years begin.
                                                (“Yellow Tang”)

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A Witch’s Dictionary

Wednesday, January 14th, 2009

by Sarah Kennedy
Elixir Press 2008
Reviewed by Melinda Wilson

5

Playing it Wicked

Kennedy_elixirA Witch’s Dictionary is dense with its concept. It’s difficult to read, sometimes tortuous, other times rewarding. Sarah Kennedy infuses the book with alluring historical facts regarding witchcraft and witch trials. The witchery is juxtaposed with or compared to contemporary pre-election politics, particularly those of the Bush administration, giving this collection its necessary variegation. Witch hunts are bad; Kennedy builds bridges between witch hunts against women in Salem, witch hunts against Islam and witch hunts women in general.

In Part I’s opener, “A Witch’s Dictionary (A),” Kennedy writes, “no one wants / to be named among the unpatriotic.” The poem begins with two epigraphs, one from 1621’s The Witch of Edmonton that states, “A witch? Who is not?” To be unpatriotic is to be a witch, to be a demon, to be different, not to be trusted. Last year, President-Elect Obama opted not to put his hand on his heart during the National Anthem, and some attempted to shape the incident into a sign of great disloyalty. Even later in the election we saw Obama called a terrorist and a socialist. Dare I say it, Barack Obama was named a witch (or warlock, as it were).

An epigraph to the second poem in A Witch’s Dictionary quotes our current president, George W. Bush, discussing U.S. enemies. He says that they never fail to seek out ways to bring hurt to our country and its people, and “neither do we.” Kennedy also makes reference to Bush’s term “shock and awe,” obviously drawing parallels between the way in which “witches” were once feared and hated and the way in which cultures that diverge from the American way of life are often feared, rejected, castigated or punished.

Later in the collection, Kennedy makes note of the doubt that some “expressed / about the validity of The War.” Again, criticism of one’s country equates to lack of patriotism, just as centuries ago, doubt of one’s religion was a sign of witchcraft. This thought is echoed in another Bush quote that begins “A Witch’s Dictionary (E).” Bush speaks against those that kill “in the name of—in the name of some kind of false religion.” Bush’s America, Kennedy suggests, is too shallow to understand anything outside of itself.

As much as the book may be political, it also comments heavily on misjudgment and wrongdoing against women. In “A Witch’s Dictionary (C),” Kennedy writes, “Confess, confess: / to being old, female, or dirty.” To be one or all of these things is to be unacceptable. It’s Hester Prynne, it’s Salem Witch Trials. In many ways, Kennedy predicts another era of witch trials. In “A Witch’s Dictionary (H),” she writes:

                     …There’s not enough Valium,
  there aren’t enough glasses of afternoon
  Chardonnay to dull their anger, there’s not
  
  enough food (:cars: jobs: child support) to go
  around.

Most of what’s mentioned here seems to relate somehow to women’s issues, but also to what one might define “homeland security” issues. We destroy others’ lives in the name of “justice” or “homeland security” but we aren’t truly taking care of our own, thus destroying ourselves without any outside help.

Kennedy’s book is relevant, but drowns in its heavy-handed “witch” concept. Nearly all the poems are titled “A Witch’s Dictionary,” A-Z. The Bush parallels are sometimes interesting, but never unpredictable. Instead of spinning the traditional witch hunt thesis into something inventive, A Witch’s Dictionary is made less compelling, is deflated, by its self-importance.

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The Ghost Soldiers

Wednesday, January 14th, 2009

by James Tate
Ecco Press 2008
Reviewed by John Deming

8_5

“What a desperate creature man is, or, no, / not man, I am.”

ghost soldiersA winter ago, I drank beer at a bar with a literary critic. He told me that he had all but given up on James Tate for a pretty credible reason: he’d been let down too many times by story-poems that started with cleverness of purpose, but meandered into what seemed a series of arbitrary whims. His disappointment in Tate was like that of a dog owner shocked when his “good dog” bites a neighborhood girl and has to be euthanized. Like that of a ten-year-old whose divorced Dad always calls eight minutes before their weekly visits to Applebee’s to say “too busy, but definitely next week.” After a while, I suppose, one stops believing.

But believe me, The Ghost Soldiers is going to linger. It’s true that sometimes, the suspension of disbelief one must employ when entering a Tate tale doesn’t pay off; the poem ends, one feels duped. Both The Ghost Soldiers and his last book, Return to the City of White Donkeys, are bulky and so include such poems. But all of Tate’s new poems are refreshingly chancy, and the lesser poems martyr themselves before their more marvelous battle-buddies. His most fully-imagined poems crystallize as they proceed, and present an otherwordly quality that no contemporary writer can match. Living in Tate’s world has to do with waking up and realizing you can’t remember your own name. For the reader, too, it means waking up on a battlefield in civilian clothes with a loaded M-16 at your side and no idea which side you’re fighting for. You enter, in Tate’s best work, a dream world. Or, in the case of The Ghost Soldiers, an Orwellian nightmare.

Tate is brilliant about war (has been since The Lost Pilot), and war is everywhere in The Ghost Soldiers. Which war? All of them, none of them. The roots are what matter: the fear, confusion, and powerlessness that impel individuals to become members of a group that means to destroy another group. Yet in The Ghost Soldiers, battlefield poems blend seamlessly with poems set in living rooms and kitchens on the homefront. Human interaction is everywhere, but nearly every conversation involves some kind of misunderstanding; everyone’s anxious, ripe with forboding, but hardly anyone knows why.

Tate’s men and women live in purgatory. People are accused of things they can’t say for sure they did or didn’t do; anyone can be perceived as both innocent and guilty, and everyone constantly, constantly forgets. Fear abounds: fear of death, fear of pain, fear of war, fear of trust, fear of Big Brother. In “The Goldfinches,” an average man is accused of plotting to bomb a building. He is innocent, so the charge feels outrageous. But the powerful can do whatever they like: “They are masters of illusion. The can make / you believe anything is real.” The man’s life was one thing, and now it is something else:

                                                       My lawyer says there
 is no use fighting it, they always win. He advised me to plead
 guilty and plead for leniency.

With such a ruthless power structure in place, it follows that the bulk of the public will work to serve their Leader; if confusion leads to fear, and fear to powerlessness, wholesale devotion is a way to route all three. Tate penetrates the grave consequences that can result from such blind devotion, to the extent that The Ghost Soldiers is the most violent thing he’s written. The chilling “Long Live the Queen” is told from a torturer’s perspective:

                                         …I threw him back against the wall,
 then smashed him in the face. When he fell to the floor, I kicked
 him in the ribs. He laid there moaning and sputtering. I lay
 down beside him. “You’re quite a remarkable man, you know,” I
 said, “with many admirable qualities. The Queen would like to
 meet you for tea. She’s a single lady now that her husband,
 the King, has died. She’s very attractive for her age, which
 I believe is the same as yours. I don’t mean to put any ideas
 in your head, but I hope you’ll think it over,” I said. “Over
 my dead body,” he said.

Smashed him in the face, however. Human reason only takes us so far, Tate offers; people need to find what, if anything, they can control. The torturer is validated by serving the Queen; the prisoner sustains himself by maintaining some abstract moral high ground. We readers don’t know the stakes, so beyond perhaps a general disapproval of torture, we don’t even know which side we’re on. It’s trancelike; life, we’re reminded, is a waking dream. War itself seems the enemy, but war is initiated by the same sense of confusion and powerlessness it generates.

So in Tate’s world, Big Brother too is a symptom. Perhaps people need government conspiracies in order to feel that something is being controlled. Someone has power. Perhaps we create problems for ourselves, if only so that we can control them, or let them control us:

                                                    …I want to have my wits
 about me to know what’s going on. Maybe nothing’s going on,
 just mass hysteria, waves of it sweeping over the country, people
 whispering, then screaming, something is invading their lives,
 stripping them of everything, covering them with spiders. The
 fear grows and crushes them. They barely have the strength to
 visit their doctors, who give them pills that make them happy.
 And then they become addicted to these pills, and are terrified
 of running out or being cut off.

Maybe the people are afraid and crazy; maybe the best way to control them is to keep them feeling afraid and crazy. Either way, it’s bleak, so it helps to align oneself with a cause, sidelining innate anxieties about living a meaningless life. Power structures come and go, but the urge for power will never leave us:

                               “This World Peace stuff is a load of crap,”
 I said. “Men are killing each other all over the globe. That’s
 what they do. They hate each other over land, religion, money,
 whatever. It’s a way of life. What are we supposed to do, take
 that away from them?”

An impossible war for peace, then, is the human predicament. And folksy Tate offers plenty of humans; you’ll meet Clifford, Joaquin, Mavis, Darcy, Jasper, Lester, Jones, Kimball, Jennings, Jaffee, Brian, Uncle Raymond, and dozens more, even Phongsri, who “lived in a very tiny world / but he knew how to blow it up.” Even from the relative safety of the homefront, individuals are thick with impending horror. In “Honey, Can You Hear Me?”, a confused husband thinks he and his wife have plans to go out for the evening, and says, “It will be wonderful to be there tonight”:

             “We’re not going anywhere,” she said. “I meant here. It
 will be wonderful to be here tonight,” I said. “A little romantic
 night at home,” she said. What did she mean by “nomadic?” A little
 nomadic night at home. There were times when I worried about
 Alison.

There is confusion and miscommunication here that only the omniscent reader (or writer) is privy to. Perhaps the husband could reroute his confusion by joining the military and fighting for an ideology. But sometimes, even loyalty to a cause can’t deceive someone long enough for him/her to forget s/he too is confused. Confusion permeates the battlefield, too; in “The Enemy,” a man confesses that his life had been “squandered” until he joined the army: “I was an ideal / soldier… There / was nothing I wouldn’t do to please my officers.” Yet when we see him in battle, “right” and “wrong” break down:

               I said to Kansas, “What are we doing wrong?” He
 said, “You still don’t get it, do you? We’re the enemy.” I was
 confused.

In The Ghost Soldiers, war tries, but can’t but provide what, say, professional sports provide: battle lines. Meaning, clearly defined. A war vet in the supermarket is interrupted by a woman who claims he “saved her village.” He’s hard pressed to see it that way, or to see it at all, but she insists:

                                                     …“No, that’s not true. You
 were so brave and courageous,” she said. “That was a long time
 ago. I have forgotten many of the details,” I said, and tried to
 push past her.

Perhaps he’s right; the next person he bumps into says, “I ought to break your neck / right here in front of everybody, you low-down, vicious killer.” Rightness then amid nothingness and confusion has to do with perspective, and little else.

This tension is also implicit with Tate’s forward-minded formal considerations. Each poem is indented, and has the look and feel of a prose poem, but is in fact broken into lines. There a slow swell at work; while individual poems maintain singular line-lengths, line-lengths from poem to poem swell gracefully, and tend to get longer as the book proceeds (as they did in Return to the City…). Here we have the ebb and flow of tension, tension too shy and fearful to step out of line and become rage. They are poems of strong and secretive rhythm, poems as hidden and fearful as Tate’s narrators. Lines disguise themselves; they break at odd moments, the result of a mysterious compliance to order. Tate is the only poet of his stature that insists upon yet conceals invention in this way.

I should note again that The Ghost Soldiers is not exempt for the meandering I mentioned in the beginning. Does Tate make it up at random as he goes along? Charles Simic seems to think so: “To write a poem out of nothing at all is Tate’s genius…just about anything can happen next in this kind of poetry.” Some poems become boring or inconsequential as they progress. In others, the poet too plainly writes himself out of the poem; in “Map of the Lost World,” for example, our narrator describes interesting objects that he finds while cleaning his house. He then sits down to think, and concludes by likening his contemplation to “pulling a yak over / a mountaintop, hauling water and rice to a dead wise man, / who knows nothing, says nothing.” Literally, the man is sitting on his couch. Early on, the poem is tastefully peppered with nostalgia. But Tate’s poems are so deeply metaphorical by themselves that when a narrator starts making his own yak and rice metaphors out of the blue, the results are uninteresting.
 
But the improvisational vibrations in these poems tend to arrive flush with their subject matter, as if they too are written purely from powerlessness and confusion, and stand as an experiment; the poet sits as scientist creating hypotheses, looking for something–and somehow maitains his charm throughout. What he finds is what Wallace Stevens found: imagination (incidentally, Stevens supplies the book’s epigraph: “The paratroopers fall and as they fall / They mow the lawn.”). He creates a world and controls it the best he can. Sometimes his findings are insignificant, but in more than a few cases, they are as palpable and meaningful as the sacs in your lungs, as whatever it was you dreamt last night. In the end, the ideal answer to Tate’s challenges is a form of personal responsibility: “What a desperate creature man is, or, no, / not man, I am.” Man, not men, woman, not women. Individuals may seem powerless, but the extent to which they can control their own actions is the extent to which they can control anything at all.

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The Shadow of Sirius

Monday, January 5th, 2009

by W.S. Merwin
Copper Canyon Press 2008
Reviewed by Jason Bredle

9

Speak, Memory

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W.S. Merwin has written, translated and studied a lot of poetry during his lifetime, and his newest collection, The Shadow of Sirius, undoubtedly demonstrates the payoff of that work. While deceptively simple, the poems effortlessly pursue themes lying at the core of human experience: childhood, impermanence, mortality and memory. They’re beyond poignant and possibly even beyond his best work. They’re essential.

Sirius is divided into three sections loosely separated but also linked thematically – the first a recollection of youth, the second a series of ruminations on death, and the third a less definable hodgepodge of observation. The focus of sections one and two allow them to resonate a little more powerfully than three as actual “sections,” but all remain effortlessly lyrical and all convey a general message that when one sits and reflects upon everything in old age, these are the most important things in a lifetime. Simultaneously, age seems to have transcended time for Merwin. In “Still Morning,” he writes:

It appears now that there is only one
age and it knows
nothing of age as the flying birds know
nothing of the air they are flying through
or of the day that bears them up
through themselves
and I am a child before there are words

What proceeds in section one is quite a phenomenal display of memory and poetic expertise combining to result in simple, profound moments. In “The Pinnacle,” Merwin writes of a friendship he had with a teacher he once admired, and of the impermanence of that relationship:

she was beautiful
in her camel hair coat
that seemed like the autumn leaves
our walk was her idea
we liked listening to each other
her voice was soft and sure
and we went our favorite way
the first time just in case
it was the only time
even though it might be too far
we went all the way
up the Palisades to the place
we called the pinnacle
with its park at the cliff’s edge
overlooking the river
it was already a secret
the pinnacle
as we were walking back
when the time was later
than we had realized
and in fact no one
seemed to know where we had been
even when she told them
no one had heard of the pinnacle

and then where did she go

I could quote most of section one here and it would be equally as powerful, but I’ll refrain. The poet captures the general essence in “A Likeness,” in which he writes “I have only what I remember.” Moments from childhood, things we remember of people we’ve known, these are what ultimately resonate as important in our lives, and these things are typically remarkably simple, enhanced by a sight, smell or sound.

The book turns more specifically to ideas of impermanence and mortality in the more compact section two. “By Dark” works as a metaphor for the act of dying itself:

When it is time I follow the black dog
into the darkness that is the mind of day

I can see nothing there but the black dog
the dog I know going ahead of me

In “Dream of Koa Returning,” a consideration of the loss of an animal results in the consideration of impermanence:

I looked out to the river
flowing beyond the big trees
and all at once you
were just behind me
lying watching me
as you did years ago
and not stirring at all
when I reached back slowly
hoping to touch
your long amber fur
and there we stayed without moving
listening to the river
and I wondered whether
it might be a dream
whether you might be a dream
whether we both were a dream
in which neither of us moved

I don’t really know what I can say about that passage other than the fact that it deserves ten billion enthusiastic thumbs up. It’s quite a revelatory moment in a brief period of text – the speaker sitting, thinking of his dead pet, then regarding both his own and his pet’s impermanence – and isn’t this what poetry is supposed to be about?

As I mentioned, section three seems more a mixture of daily meditations. It’s not quite as focused as the first two, but reverberates quite well. In one of the most powerful pieces in the section, “Shadow Hand,” the speaker thinks of a roof repairman he once knew:

yesterday after all these years
I learned he had suddenly
gone blind while still in his sixties
and died soon after that while I
was away and I never knew
and it seemed as though it had just
happened and it had not been long
since we stood in the road talking
about owls nesting in chimneys
in the dark in empty houses

Again, a revelation found in a brief moment, another revelation leading to a reflection on the impermanence of all things. Ultimately, “Worn Words” summarizes the essence of this book the best:

The late poems are the ones
I turn to first now
following a hope that keeps
beckoning me
waiting somewhere in the lines
almost in plain sight

it is the late poems
that are made of words
that have come the whole way
they have been there

As such, The Shadow of Sirius acts in itself as a collection of late poems. They are made of words that have come the whole way, that have been there. In a world of so many poetry projects with so many complicated agendas, this collection both reemphasizes and illuminates the importance and relevance of good poetry.

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Year in Review 2008

Thursday, January 1st, 2009

2008 was quite a year. Merwin wrote his best book, and not too many seemed to notice; Katy Lederer was money, and a lot of people noticed; Gabbert and Rooney took “LOL” and girl talk to the level of high art, and our two most relevant Young poets (Dean and Kevin) reminded us that being prolific can be a very good thing. Throw in great new work from ready-made greats (Bidart, Graham, Howard) and some of the best first books money can buy (Cirelli, Dennigan, Dodds), and we can be reaffirmed that page poetry is still a living, breathing thing. Heck, we even elected a recovering poet President of the United States.

BEST BOOK OF THE YEAR: The Landscapist, Pierre Martory (trans. John Ashbery)

And the rest of the winners are…
 

Best Book of New Poetry Published in 2008
(Award for a book of all new poems; any selected/collected is ineligible, regardless of how many new poems are included in the collection)

Watching the Spring Festival, Frank Bidart
Lobster With Ol’ Dirty Bastard, Michael Cirelli
Corinna a-Maying the Apocalypse, Darcie Dennigan
That Tiny Insane Voluptuousness, Elisa Gabbert & Kathleen Rooney
Sea Change, Jorie Graham
Without Saying, Richard Howard
The Heaven-Sent Leaf, Katy Lederer
Rogue Hemlocks, Carl R. Martin
The Landscapist, Pierre Martory (trans. John Ashbery)
The Shadow of Sirius, W.S. Merwin
The Most of It, Mary Ruefle
Ours, Cole Swensen
The Ghost Soldiers, James Tate
Winter Journey, Tony Towle
Irresponsibility, Chris Vitiello
Primitive Mentor, Dean Young
Dear Darkness, Kevin Young

Best First Book

Lobster With Ol’ Dirty Bastard, Michael Cirelli
Corinna a-Maying the Apocalypse, Darcie Dennigan
Crabwise to the Hounds, Jeramy Dodds
19 Names for Our Band, Jibade-Khalil Huffman
Holy Land, Rauan Klassnik
Forms of Intercession, Jayne Pupek

Best Second Book

For Girls (& Others), Shanna Compton
cognitive behavioral therapy, Tao Lin
My Zorba, Danielle Pafunda
Irresponsibility, Chris Vitiello
Picture Palace, Stephanie Young

Best All-New Collection by a Canonical Figure

Watching the Spring Festival, Frank Bidart
Without Saying, Richard Howard
War Horses, Yusef Komunyakaa
The Shadow of Sirius, W.S. Merwin
The Ghost Soldiers, James Tate

Best Selected/Collected

Fire to Fire, Mark Doty
In Praise of the Unfinished, Julia Hartwig
Sleeping it Off in Rapid City, August Kleinzahler
My Vocabulary Did This To Me, Jack Spicer
What Love Comes To, Ruth Stone
 
Best Short Poem in a New Collection

“You Cannot Rest”, Frank Bidart (from Watching the Spring Festival)
“January in Paris”, Billy Collins (from Ballistics)
“Suffer”, Katy Lederer (from The Heaven-Sent Leaf)
“Long Live the Queen”, James Tate (from The Ghost Soldiers)
“Force of Rabbit,” Dean Young (from Primitive Mentor)

Best Long Poem in a New Collection
(Award for a new poem at least 5 pages in length)

“The Feeling of the World as a Bounded Whale is the Mystical”, Darcie Dennigan, from Corinna a-Maying the Apocalypse
“Interview with Medea”, Richard Howard, from Without Saying
“Autobiography of My Alter-Ego”, Yusef Komunyakaa, from War Horses
“Virtues of the Boring Husband”, Li-Young Lee, from Behind My Eyes
“Unscripted”, Lee Sharkey, from A Darker, Sweeter String

Best Book-Length Poem

Parse, Craig Dworkin
How to Build the Ghost in Your Attic, Peter Jay Shippy
Saga/Circus, Lyn Hejinian
Ours, Cole Swensen

Best Anthology

State of the Union: Fifty Political Poems, edited by Joshua Beckman and Matthew Zapruder
Black Dog, Black Night: Contemporary Vietnamese Poetry, edited by Nguyen Do and Paul Hoover
Lightning from the Depths: An Anthology of Albanian Poetry, edited by Robert Elsie and Janet Mathie-Heck
Poets on the Edge: An Anthology of Contemporary Hebrew Poetry, edited by Tsipi Keller
The Best American Erotic Poetry, edited by David Lehman

Best First Poem in a New Collection

“Marilyn Monroe”, Frank Bidart, from Watching the Spring Festival
“I Sense a Second Heart”, Darcie Dennigan, from Corinna a-Maying the Apocalypse
“Tritina Five”, Elisa Gabbert and Kathleen Rooney, from That Tiny Insane Voluptuousness
“Snow”, Mary Ruefle, from The Most of It
“Flash Flood Blues”, Kevin Young, from Dear Darkness

Best Final Poem in a New Collection

“To Whom it May Concern:”, Elisa Gabbert and Kathleen Rooney, from That Tiny Insane Voluptuousness
“No Long Way Round”, Jorie Graham, from Sea Change
“The War Next Door”, James Tate, from The Ghost Soldiers
“The Brown Boy Loves the White Man”, Ronaldo Wilson, from Narrative of the Life of the Brown Boy and the White Man
“Afterward”, Dean Young, from Primitive Mentor

Best Opening Lines

From “Marilyn Monroe”, opener for Frank Bidart’s Watching the Spring Festival:

 Because the pact beneath ordinary life (if you
 give me enough money, you can continue to fuck me—)

 induces in each person you have ever known
 panic and envy before the abyss…

 

From “There’s a child…”, opener for Rauan Klassnik’s Holy Land:

There’s a child in a ditch by the side of the road. She’s the source of every drop of blood. Shadows, knives, machetes—angels sharpening the horns of beasts you’ll never see…

From “The Heaven-Sent Leaf,” opener for Katy Lederer’s The Heaven-Sent Leaf:

 The speculation of contemporary life.
 The teeming green of utterance.

 To feel this clean,
 This dream-éclat.

 There is, in the heart, the hard-rendering profit.

From “Flash Flood”, opener for Kevin Young’s Dear Darkness:

I’m the African American
sheep of the family.

I got my master’s
degree in slavery.

Evacuee,
I seen the water

Ladder its way
above me. Swam

To the savings and loan–
no one home.

 

Best Closing Lines

From “Collector”, closer for Frank Bidart’s Watching the Spring Festival:

Tell yourself, again, The Rituals
you love imply that, repeating them,

you store seeds that promise

the end of ritual. You store
seeds. Tell yourself, again,

what you store are seeds.

From “To Whom it May Concern:”, closer for Elisa Gabbert and Kathleen Rooney’s That Tiny Insane Voluptuousness:

 Tiny hearts all over my c.v. led me
 to a lovely unemployment. I say:
 Let the kids do what they’re gonna—
 that’s the only way they’ll learn.
 I miss it already, all the kissing
 of my youth, the days of yore.
 Forget what I said before. This is
 all I’ve got. There isn’t any more.

From , closer for Tao Lin’s cognitive behavioral therapy:

alone in my room
i just drank an energy drink
i feel your head and face behind my face
does that mean we’re together?
then my eyes became rounder and more kitten-like
two perfect circles formed on my face–*CUTE* 

From “The War Next Door”, closer for James Tate’s The Ghost Soldiers:

  “…We’re just gaining our strength
 back,” one of them said. I shut the door and went back in the
 living room. I heard scratches at the window at first, but then
 they faded off. I heard a bugle in the distance, then the roar of
 a cannon. I still didn’t know which side I was on.

 

Best Book Cover

Corinna a-Maying the Apocalypse, Darcie Dennigan 

Dennigan--corinna
Sleeping it Off in Rapid City, August Kleinzahler

Kleinzahler cover 
The Collected Poems of Sylvia Plath (re-issue, replacing this abomination), Sylvia Plath

Plath collected cover
 

  

  
 

A Darker, Sweeter String, Lee Sharkey

Sharkey cover 

The Hive, Susan Stewart
Stewart cover

Worst Book Cover 

(see the worst book covers here)

Poetics, Aristotle
Leaping Poetry, Robert Bly
Silence Fell, Josephine Dickinson
Sea Change, Jorie Graham
The Odes of Horace, Horace
Zombie Haiku, Ryan Mecum
Bill, Bill Rector
Best “Thirteenth Poem”
(The artifact itself)

Notes from the Air, John Ashbery (new paperback edition, Ecco Press)
The Selected Poems of Hamster, Carlos Blackburn (Ugly Duckling Presse)
Fire to Fire, Mark Doty (hardcover edition, HarperCollins)
Simply Rocket, Matt Hart (Lame House Press)
Holy Land, Rauan Klassnik (Black Ocean)
Best Response to Coldfront
(Award for greatness in reacting to America’s favorite poetry review journal)

No competition this year:

“Bad Reviews: An Antidote”, Kathryn Stripling Byer
http://kathrynstriplingbyer.blogspot.com/2008/09/bad-reviews.html